Audience Feedback on Pitch

Feedback 1

I feel that the pitch is very basic, and quite boring. It doesn't really show the creative side of the creators. However, it does give a detailed explanation of the film, but not in a very creative way. The way it is portrayed seems opposite to how the film should be portrayed. It seems extremely rushed and could be of a much better quality, because I do not find the pitch appealing at all and because of this, even though I quite like the story, there's a chance that i would be put off watching the film when it's released. 

Feedback 2

I enjoyed the story, and I would definitely watch it, but the way that it was put across in the pitch could've been a lot better. The background music is extremely cheesy, they don't seem very enthusiastic about the story and it seems extremely rushed and as if no thought went into it, with them reading scripts from their phones. It seems as though they just wanted to get it out of the way and start work on other things rather than spend time on creating their pitch.

Feedback 3

The pitch, in my opinion, seems very rushed. It seems as though it was planned 5 minutes before it was filmed, especially as they are reading off of their phones. It doesn't show much enthusiasm in the story, which is the opposite of what I expected, and it may put me off watching it, even if the story itself is actually quite good. It's quite boring, and quite dreary, especially the way they talk - it seems very business-like to me, which I don't really like.